PrepExIf an essay is about what schools should teach, can 'curriculum' and 'syllabus' replace each other? An example where one fits better would help.
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hazelpages
For example, 'Schools should teach students how to compare loan costs.' Is that clearer than only saying they should improve the curriculum?
clearspark
Yes, it names the change. You'd still need to explain why that skill matters for the essay's argument, but the reader can now see what you're proposing.