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WebinarHow to score 7+ in IELTS Writing Task 1

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DmytroV

For Academic Task 1, watch for explanations the chart doesn't support. 'Sales fell because prices rose' needs evidence of the cause, not just two changes happening at the same time.

yasmin_f

Yes, if the visual actually shows those changes over the same period. 'While' connects the observations without claiming one caused the other.
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