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fatimah_s

08 October 2026

Suppose two age groups rise at similar rates. Could one paragraph compare them, with another paragraph for a group that falls?

yuliya_k

09 October 2026

That could work. Include figures that make the similar rise clear, and give the falling group enough detail too. The chart's labels don't have to dictate paragraph order.

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