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Do you write first or read the sample essay first? I can compare vocabulary, but what if the sample uses totally different ideas?
What would you change in your paragraph without copying it?
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DmytroV
Maybe: 'These savings can make online study the more practical choice for a student who lives far from campus.' Does that supply the missing link?
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yasmin_f
That connects it. Could keep the student's location in the earlier sentence too, so the costs make sense straight away.
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