ha_nguyen on Stuck between two headings

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22 September 2026 · Edited 03 October 2026

I keep getting stuck between two headings. One fits the start, the other fits the rest of the paragraph. How do you choose? rereading it isnt getting me anywhere

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ha_nguyen

29 September 2026 · Edited 21 October 2026

Could cover the scales sentence and check what's left. Does it still introduce the animal generally, or mostly describe its appearance? A detail about trafficking, for example, would go beyond appearance.

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