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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a mandatory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
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DmytroV

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This sounds like agreeing with compulsory service, but with conditions. Would 'I agree, provided that...' fit better? Choosing the activity is different from choosing whether to take part.
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selin96

'I agree, provided that' does fit better. My old version left 'choice' doing two jobs: compulsory service with a choice of activity, not a choice about taking part. The swap avoids that.
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