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ivan88

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If two figures are close, is it clearer to compare in one sentence or give each its own sentence?
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amara07

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If the shared pattern is the point, grouping them can make it clearer: 'Both stayed close to 40%.' Separate sentences can help when you describe different trends; similar figures don't require a particular sentence count.

yuliya_k

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Different figures can go in one sentence too: 'X accounted for 40%, compared with 20% for Y.' Split them when each needs a separate trend or explanation, not simply because the numbers are far apart.
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