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DmytroV on Task 1 challenge - Writing overview (2 sentences)

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Hello dear community members! I want you to write a 2-sentence overview paragraph in the comments section below! I will provide feedback in the comments. Let's go!
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DmytroV

In your description, Sweden rises first and then falls. 'Fell overall' leaves room for that; 'fell throughout' would mean something different. Worth checking that distinction when you revise the overview.
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