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Hello, how can I develop ideas for essays?

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coralnotes

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Maybe: 'A student who cannot afford several textbooks could borrow them and still complete the reading for their course.' That shows what the books let them do. 'Libraries are important for education' just repeats it.

mintmosaic

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Does the example have to be from a real study, or is this possible situation enough? no percentages, just the student borrowing books
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